![]() All i am saying is, take advantage of these powerful tools to keep your audience immerse in your game. Now if music and sound has that type of power, why would you leave it out of your game? The MC often takes fresh air breaks, so why not add the sound of a gently breeze(or whatever the weather is like), humming and shower sounds, moans, and varies other sounds. Almost every emotion known to men can be felt by music, and sound follows the same principle. Music is like medicine to our souls, where words fail, music speaks. Your writing abilities aren't bad at all, it just sounds very unnatural to a Native English speaker, and the more time the players spend correcting your errors, the more they'll become disinterested in your product. Hire or ask for help from a Native English speaker, to fix/minimize the many grammatical errors that are present in your writing. However, I see a lot of potential in this game, therefore i wanted to leave my review and a few suggestions, that could potentially get you 5 stars from everyone. Usually I don't like writing out reviews, due to them taking a lot of my time. Why are the male MC's "enemies" depraved?. ![]()
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